Monday, August 08, 2005

The Pinkish Brown Building
-specially written for qi'en and the rest of my frens who were there today.-

Not too long ago were the orange balloons released,
Good friends' names written on one special one.
Excitedly took pictures of the memorable moment-
Enough to last for a lifetime...

And today memories of that wonderful saturday were recollected,
Not everyone understood what we were talking about.
Nice blog entry where the building was mentioned became mistaken for a poem...

Cos' i made a promise to my dear fellow friend to have this poem written,
It's time i try to complete it and post it up.
Tonight shall be the moment i have a self-written poem posted for the first time,
Yucky and horrible it may be, thankew for reading it!

~~ maryann ~~

great, now i feel like an accomplished poet having one poem published under my name. ah haha, sorry...that sounded off, pls pardon me. i'm very tired after walking around with u pple today but i decided to write this poem before my inspiration is gone :) now ...lemme do a poem analysis ok? haha, maybe i shall let u all read it first and post comments. i shall see who can analyse this poem most interestingly. kk, whoever is free can write an essay to discuss this poem [thou i doubt anyone would do it :( ] thereafter, i would post the "model essay" ...hahahaha.

gdnite